The Breaking Point

Imagine a girl

Held down by her race

Held down by people who thought they loved her

Imagine being held down by society

One day she meets a friend

Another girl to share her pain and sorrows

Her ups and downs in her life.

They hit things off instantly

They make vowes to be true to each other

Through the thick and the thin

They vow to support each other whenever they fight through the tears and the sorrow

They promise to be together, forever, friends, till the end of time.

Until someone flips the water and everything around them becomes cold as ice.

The girl doesn’t understand why the tides turned so quickly

She winds up in a place of fury and confusion

Her friend decides for her that thier friendship is over and done

She wants to fight to get it over with.

The girl doesn’t want to, but she will if she wants to defend herself.

She doesn’t want this petty drama to get in the way of thier beautiful friendship

She wants to say ” I’m sorry” and let the by gones be by gones.

But the friend says it’s too late.

The girl doesn’t want to fight

She doesn’t want to join fists to make a problem even bigger”Just Go back to the ways before” she tells herself.

She prays that God brings her out of this petty drama.

But her prayers went Unanswered.

She heads to the local park to “settle” the petty drama

She wants to get it over and done with

But her intuition keeps telling her no.

When she gets there, she feels queasy

Something keeps telling her that something isn’t right.

From the shadows , she see’s 5 dark figures coming to approach her.

Turns out these figures are the other girls friends

The girl didn’t sign up for this

She thought it was going to be one and one.

One by one they take their turn and beat her to a pulp, leaving her bloody and swollen.

If that wasn’t enough, the next day they chase her into her home and beat her up some more

One of the jumpers asked the girl “Why didn’t you fight back?”

The Girl responded “I’m through with this because I am better than this.”

In the next couple of hours the girl who got bullied and wounded up swollen and bloody takes her own life.

She had enough of bullying and taunting and she just wanted it to end.

She thought that this was the only way…

She tied herself to a fan with the help of a blanket and hung herself while her little brother and sister watched.

The brother screamed in horror, he didn’t know what to do.

The only thing he could do was cry in horror and get the neighbors …But it was too late, she was already gone

Mom came home from work and the first thing she saw was yellow police tape around her door

She demanded what was going, she wanted to see what was wrong

Then she see’s her daughter’s body being carried away out the house

She screams in pain and agnoy screaming “My BABY! MY BABY!” But nothing can bring her daughter back.


That little girl, the 13 year old girl

Had Her Breaking Point and she though this was the only way to deal…

Now a family  is left confused and trying to understand why would someone ever push her to her breaking point.




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